Detailed outline = good storytelling and that's what I like about this story. Too many fandoms produce garbage stories without a plot, but this, I can already tell, has texture and depth. Your voices really do sound real and not forced. I like your characterization...this misled Michael that's still walking a dark path but doubts are surfacing. We haven't seen too much of your David (although I hope the story remains from a Michael POV) but he seems like he has the strength and sincerity that makes him so appealing IRL. Genuine and dare I say, a little adorable (hate the word but it's appropriate). Better yet: sweet. :)

I can't wait to see how things develop from here. Post soon, por favor.